The Odyssey Retold By Teilo Berquier

The Twelve Disloyal Handmaidens

The maids who slept with the suitors. Hanged in the storeroom from a beam. Telemachus did the work himself. The most uncomfortable scene in the book.

They are not named. They are twelve, by tradition, women of the household who took the suitors to their beds during the long absence. After the hall is cleared of suitor bodies, Odysseus orders them brought down. They come in ones and twos, some dragging their feet, some moving fast as if speed could change what was already decided. He doesn’t bother with names. The betrayal is the fact of their being here. [SPOILER: Telemachus carries the rope. His face is young, still young, but something has calcified in it in the last hour. He has killed men. He has watched his father kill men. He takes them to the storeroom, where the bow had hung in darkness for twenty years, and uses the beam that runs the width of it. Their voices rise in pleas, in curses, in sounds that are neither and both. He does not listen. His hands know their work. When it is done there is only the creak of the rope and the movement of bodies settling into stillness. He comes back to his father with rope-burned hands and does not speak. The retelling does not soften the scene or moralize it. It shows the work and lets the silence afterward do the judging. It is the moment the reckoning crosses a line that even Odysseus does not narrate, and the storeroom holds it.]